Showing posts with label Jhean Capitan. Show all posts
Showing posts with label Jhean Capitan. Show all posts

Thursday, 26 January 2017

TARGET AUDIENCE FEEDBACK: Bethany, Farhiya, Jhean, Kim



This is the feedback we got from our target audience which was teenager, most of the feedback  was very positive but there were some constructive criticisms which meant that we had to make some slight changes. Overall she was very happy with our final product. 

Tuesday, 17 January 2017

BTS - EDITING DAY 7: Bethany, Farhiya, Jhean, Kim


17/01/17



Today we are continuing fixing the fonts in our title sequence because we were told to make them more visible in our rough cut feedback. We also got a colour grading tutorial, this is when you fix the colours on the shots to make them look brighter or darker. This helped us fix the colours on a couple of our shots.



We also got some feedback from our peers in the rough cut so we made some final changes to some of our shots.


Friday, 13 January 2017

TITLE SEQUENCE NARRATION: Jhean Capitan

We created the narration December and we wanted to keep the narration more 'angsty' which reflects our main character 'Astrid'. The narration keeps a very straight-forward tone towards Astrid's views such as the fact that it would be a 'shame' if the love interest 'Lucy' was straight. This proves the fact that the main character (whilst being open minded) keeps to her own views.


ASTRID
(Sounding monotone, almost bored)

I guess I'm not what people class as... normal. Most teenage girls grow their hair down to their thighs, stalk each other's Instagram accounts, and bat their eyelashes at boys. The biological male fascinates them, and they spend copious amounts of time trying to make their existence known to them.
Not me. I'm completely different.

                  (Sighs)

So, there's this girl. Lucy. And, she's probably straight. Wasted potential. She's confident, gorgeous, outspoken... Anyway, I'm more interested in her than I've ever been interested in any immature boy.

             (Sarcastic)

But, what have I got going for me? Barely anyone wants to be my friend, I have a history of being picked on by the local bored conformists, and I dress like Tim Burton styled me for a film.

       (Sounding reluctant)

Well, there is one girl who's okay. I mean, she buys palm oil skincare products and goes to KFC, but what can you do? She accepts me. Still, though, I'm not too... agreeable with the student body.
    
(A moment’s pause)

Daisie. A conservative background and self-loathing don't make a good combination. More than anything, I kind of feel sorry for her.
But that doesn't mean I enjoy getting victimised for the way I live my life.

  (Determined, strong)


My name's Astrid. And I'm gonna live it anyway.

ROUGH CUT 2 FEEDBACK: Bethany, Farhiya, Jhean, Kim

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ROUGH CUT 2: Farhiya, Jhean, Kim, Bethany


BTS - EDITING DAY 6: Bethany, Farhiya, Jhean and Kim

13/01/17

We added the clips that we re-shot a couple of weeks ago and we have started to add in the order of our title credits onto our title sequence as well as adding in transitions (fade in and fade out). This provides a smooth transition between credits. We also adjusted the exposure on one of our shots so that it wasn't as bright. We did this by clicking on the 'Effect Controls' and adjusting the clip's brightness there.


We also prepared to show our rough cut to the class so that we have feedback which will then help us to tweak our title sequence according to the feedback.

BTS - EDITING DAY 5: Bethany, Farhiya, Jhean and Kim

10/01/17

We tried to edit our title sequence according to the feedback that Dan had given, but we decided to proceed on with our original title sequence as we believed that it did not appeal to our target audience.


So we continued to fix the timing of narration in order for it to co-ordinate with the action on screen.


FEEDBACK FROM DAN: Bethany, Jhean, Farhiya, Kim

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