FIRST ROUGH CUT FEEDBACK: Bethany, Farhiya, Jhean, Kim

Feedback:

• Less zooming and more cut ins

• Establish the main character, clearly; so when the characters starts speaking, it matches the action on screen. We introduce the character when the main character starts the narration- a shot of the character walking or a clear shot of their face.

• Establish the college setting with more shots around the building; such as displays, classrooms and etc. A good example of this is Breakfast Club where the opening sequence successfully introduces the setting of the school and the themes of the film.  Shots of school lockers and empty corridors are seen and we could replicate this.